HMD - Always going smooth is never guaranteed, but I'll always live seriously, because they're here!

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Okay! HMD post! Any comments or criticism or any of that kinda stuff for Ash? All goes here. Is he awesome? Is he terrible? Is he terribly awesome? Is he the same Ash you know and love from TV?

I'm pretty sure I've managed to enable anonymous comments, so that's also cool? Also, it's all screened.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Just a note that you seem to have a habit of ending sentences in questions. Kind of like this? When a statement is being made? It slightly distorts the meaning? And it's not a big deal, but it's a little... strange. And it reads a little off when a whole thread is read. For example, here (http://10-year-old-kid.livejournal.com/1962.html?thread=174250#t174250), it happens many times.

Your Ash is fine, otherwise. Keep it up.

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Pffff... I am not entirely sure how I managed this? I'll try to work on it though? Even though I seem to be doing it now as I speak...

[insectoidalien.livejournal.com]

I thought it worked for conveying confusion or uncertainity like if he's being yelled by martians amirite?, not to mention it's a verbal tic that's not hard to find among teens. Maybe you are doing it a wee bit too much, but you don't have to drop it entirely. :>

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Yeah, I've been putting a bit of effort into not totally over abusing question marks since then. I haven't abolished them or anything though as they are kinda necessary sometimes.